Saturday, May 4, 2013

Chapter Two-----Bad Luck Autumn

"Morning sweet heart," said Autumn's mom. "Sweet heart-how can you call a girl that lost my cellphone sweet heart?!" shrieked Matilda. "What time is it?" Autumn asked sleepily. "It's 5:3,0 dummy," said Matilda. "Today is also the day you have your dance competition  so we have to leave in half an hour so please go get ready!" Mom said. "Wait, you mean today is my first dance competition?!" After a half an hour, they dropped Matilda off at her friend's house. 1 HOUR LATER--- "Autumn, your  teacher is right inside," said Mom. Autumn slowly opened the car door and took out her dance bag along with her water bottle. INSIDE--- "Listen Group 12, today is our first competition and we need to make the most of it, now did everybody bring their water bottle with them?" All the girls started shouting "I did ,I did!" "Very good....." Before the dance teacher could go on she heard the microphones say "10 minutes 'till competition!" Autumn's belly started to feel really bad- she was so nervous she felt like she had a million butterflies in her stomach. "Ok kids, now get on stage and show all the judges what group 12 is really made of !" While Autumn was dancing, she lost her balance and fell over a big pile of fake logs then, bang! She fell right off the stage. Her mother was calling her name so loud the whole world could hear her. As Autumn started to cry she slowly fell asleep

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  1. Really good Jean!! I love it! See you tomorrow!!
    {Emma}

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